Fifty Shades of Neigh – Luna Cantrip

1 star

This book was not for me at all. The two characters had absolutely no chemistry and the story itself didn’t seem to flow. It felt jerky and disconnected across the scenes.

The 50 Shades part of this was extremely on the nose; maybe this was supposed to be a sort of spoof without explicitly saying so? We have a contract with fun terms, some impact play, and strange ideas for what this scene actually looks like. All of this made it really hard for me to keep reading and stay invested.

I think this would have benefited by being longer. With it only being about 47 pages, there was no time to develop the characters and give them a compelling story. I just couldn’t get into their romance and root for them to be together